KemaKappa

I NEED HELP... Can someone judge my poem? ;;;;;; My teacher judged it 5 times but I can't seem to write something that she considers strong. ;;;;  (Only my last stanza, tbh) Give me a few pointers that's all... Please reply if you can help me...!

Y u do dis to meh too ~Meribear (https://www.deviantart.com/meribear) tbh i wouldn't mind obeying you ((((; //slapped Rules 1.Write the rules. (Or copy and paste them, whichever you prefer.) 2.Write 13 things about yourself. 3.Answer 13 questions made by the person who tagged you, and make your own 13 questions. 4.Tag 13 deviants. Make sure they know that they are tagged. 5.Don't say ''You're tagged if you read this". 6.It is forbidden not to tag anyone. 7.Tag backs are allowed. 8.If you don't make this tag in a week, you need to obey a wish of the person who tags you. STUFF ABOUT ME 1. I have a head, a pair of eyes, one mouth, a nose, a pair of ears, and hair o

~secretagentTexas (https://www.deviantart.com/secretagenttexas) tagged me~ RULES: 1. Type down your username or your name vertically. 2. Type the song that randomly just pops in your head (or if you find a song that you know) make sure that the first letter starts with whatever letter you put down. 3. Count the letters that you typed down, and tag the same number of people in your journal. Can I just do kema--- 1.K- Kishikaisei 2.E- Eine Kleine 3.M- Mystic Messenger opening 4.A- Adore U I couldn't think so I used my search engine ;;;;;;; MY BAES AND MOMS AND OTHER RELATIONS COME FORTH AND DO DA MEME: :iconDustyUndies: :iconShilohN: :iconSorabara: :iconMeribear: